ToaGC pt.2 RewriteTales of a Galactic Commander CHAPTER 2
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Commander Mercury broke through the clouds after Togekiss pulled out of the dive towards Canalave city. The air was eerily quiet as the pair hovered there in an attempt to locate the library. After a while of searching through the buildings for it he decided to take a breather for a few minutes. He lay on Togekiss back looking up at the sky. It was cloudy but there weren't enough clouds to stop the suns' rays from getting in his eyes. Instinctively he closed them and decided to keep them closed until a cloud blocked the sun.
FLASHBACK 8 YEARS AGO
It's a breezy summer afternoon in the quiet environment of Twinleaf town. Dustin sees a younger version of himself run back and forth after his Totodile by the pond at his parent's home. His shiny Beldum nudges him affectionately and
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Disclaimer: I DO NOT own pokémon or most of the character's in this story. Credit goes to their respective owners/creators.
As the sun shined over Veilstone City, one of the newest commanders of Team Galactic is waking up to the sound of his alarm clock. "Stupid alarm clock, just give me five more minutes." He groaned rolling over to turn it off. Just as he was about to fall back to sleep a crash from his doorway put him in full alert mode. He sat up and his eyes met with a fellow galactic member with purple hair tied back at the top of her head. He recognized her instantly having seen her wander the hideout and from rumours. Her name? Commander Jupiter.
"Mercury, Master Cyrus has ordered us to..." She paused for a second upon seeing her fellow comrade still in his pyjamas. "Why the hell are you still sleeping it's already past one in the afternoon!" She roared.
"What are you talking about my alarm clock was supposed to when off at seven a.m." Me
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John Mercury Berlitz, also known as Commander Mercury, who had until recently had found out the truth about his fathers disappearance thanks to the help of Celebi. After finding out the truth, he decided to help Looker to bring Team Galactic to justice for there crimes. Now he's heading back to Galactic HQ plotting there downfall.
As he entered the HQ all the grunts were running around preparing for something, Mercury didn't care so he walked by them and headed to Cyrus's office, but on the way he walked pass Commander Mars without saying a word, as he was walking away Mars ran right behind and swerved in front of him so she could talk to him.
"Mercury, where have you been? The grunts that took you to Ilex Forest said that you disappeared; now everyone thinks your dead."
Mercury didn't say a word, all he was thinking at that time was about Team Galactic's downfall, Mars continued.
"Well I'm glad that your alive, you're the only one that makes working
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John Mercury Berlitz, also known as Commander Mercury, who was recently told by one of Interpol's top agents Looker that his father was not dead, but missing. Mercury was off to Ilex Forest to find out the truth about his father.
While flying over the sea Mercury looked out one of the helicopters windows, he saw many pokémon swimming around; to him it looked like they were all playing some sort of game. He gave out a simple smile and before he knew it one of the two grunts, who were piloting the helicopter, yelled out to him saying "Sir were approaching the Johto Region, ETA to Ilex Forest six minutes."
"Johto, I haven't seen it in over seven years." Mercury said out loud while making sure to stay focused and not have another flashback.
"What did you say sir?"
"Nothing, I was just talking to myself."
"Well if you continue talking to yourself, you'll start looking like some sort of psychotic person."
"Coming from the grunts who were forced to have
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John Mercury Berlitz, also known as Commander Mercury, was running towards the Team Galactic warehouse to warn his cousin Dawn of the excitation order that was placed on their heads by Cyrus. The only thing that Mercury could think of while running towards his cousin was what he promised her a year ago.
-One year ago-
On a clear March day, John Berlitz was returning to the Sinnoh region after his journey across the Orre region. Today was a special day for John, for today was his favorite and only cousin Dawn's birthday. He ran towards Sandgem Town with a few bags full of souvenirs for his trip in his hands, until he reach Dawn's house. As he knocked on the door he heard people singing form inside, he automatically knew that everyone inside was singing happy birthday to Dawn. Soon after they singing was over someone opened the door for him, it was his own cousin Dawn. After seeing his face Dawn gave him a big hug due to the fact that they both haven't
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-One week has pasted since chapter 3-
Rain clouds covered the skies over Veilstone City, John Mercury Berlitz, also known as Commander Mercury, was fast asleep in his soft bed dreaming up the memory of him kissing Cherry Silph. Until a single grunt burst into the commanders saying "Commander Sir, Mars, Charon and Jupiter has returned to HQ. Master Cyrus has also called an emergency meeting." Mercury, who is unfortunately wide wake, let out a huge sigh and got up form his comfy bed. He let out a long yawn before looking at his clock for the time. Without looking at the grunt, he told him that he got the message and that he will meet them in the usual place. The grunt gave Mercury a quick bow and then he was off. Mercury, who was still sitting on his bed, quickly thought to himself about his so called dream, he couldn't tell if it really happened or if his imagination is getting the better of him. Mercury quickly got dressed and headed for Cyrus's offic